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Essay Topic
People attend college or university for many different
reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation,
increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend
college or university? Use specific reasons and examples
to support your answer.
(Text
Box)
People attend college and university for different
reasons. However, people mainly attend college for
career preparation.
There are approximately 30,000 students register for
class each semester. Out of that big number very few
students register class for new experience or increased
knowledge. However, most of the students attend to
college or university to earn a degree. The degree
will help find a job or open window of promotion at
existing job.
I attend CJR200 class this semester. We have 15 students.
One student said that he attended the class to increased
her knowledge. The rest of the students take the class
because this class is helpful for their career. From
that you can see that my thesis is proved. Most people
go for career preparation.
Many students set up their mind before come to college
which career they will take. Students study on their
selected field of study prepare their career.
Many part-time students attend college and university
for career preparation not for any other reason.For
example, a student go to Medical school to earn a
medical degree. So the student can start a good career.
In conclusion, people go to school and college mainly
for career preparation.
addresses the writing topic adequately
but may slight parts of the task
is adequately organized and developed
uses some details to support a thesis
or illustrate an idea
demonstrates adequate but possibly inconsistent
facility with syntax and usage
may contain some errors that occasionally
obscure meaning
ID: sampleuser
Date Submitted: 02/08/2002
Time Taken to Compose Essay online: 00:28:42 Score:
4
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Topic: People attend college or university for many
different reasons (for example, new experiences, career
preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think
people attend college or university? Use specific
reasons and examples to support your answer.
Essay:
People attend college and university for different
reasons. However, people mainly attend college for
career preparation.
There are approximately 30,000 students register for
class each semester. Out of that big number very few
students register class for new experience or increased
knowledge. However, most of the students attend to
college or university to earn a degree. The degree
will help find a job or open window of promotion at
existing job.
I attend CJR200 class this semester. We have 15 students.
One student said that he attended the class to increased
her knowledge. The rest of the students take the class
because this class is helpful for their career. From
that you can see that my thesis is proved. Most people
go for career preparation.
Many students set up their mind before come to college
which career they will take. Students study on their
selected field of study prepare their career.
Many part-time students attend college and university
for career preparation not for any other reason.For
example, a student go to Medical school to earn a
medical degree. So the student can start a good career.
In conclusion, people go to school and college mainly
for career preparation.
Score of 4:
A typical essay at this level:
addresses the writing topic adequately
but may slight parts of the task
is adequately organized and developed
uses some details to support a thesis or illustrate
an idea
demonstrates adequate but possibly inconsistent facility
with syntax and usage
may contain some errors that occasionally obscure
meanin
(Text Box)
People attend college and university for different reasons.
However, people mainly attend college for career preparation.
There are approximately 30,000 students register for class
each semester. Out of that big number very few students
register class for new experience or increased knowledge.
However, most of the students attend to college or university
to earn a degree. The degree will help find a job or open
window of promotion at existing job.
I attend CJR200 class this semester. We have 15 students.
One student said that he attended the class to increased
her knowledge. The rest of the students take the class because
this class is helpful for their career. From that you can
see that my thesis is proved. Most people go for career
preparation.
Many students set up their mind before come to college which
career they will take. Students study on their selected
field of study prepare their career.
Many part-time students attend college and university for
career preparation not for any other reason.For example,
a student go to Medical school to earn a medical degree.
So the student can start a good career.
In conclusion, people go to school and college mainly for
career preparation.
ID: sampleuser
Date Submitted: 02/08/2002
Time Taken to Compose Essay online: 00:28:42 Score: 4
Advice to Writers
View Your Other Essay and Score
Topic: People attend college or university for many different
reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation,
increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college
or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support
your answer.
Essay:
People attend college and university for different reasons.
However, people mainly attend college for career preparation.
There are approximately 30,000 students register for class
each semester. Out of that big number very few students
register class for new experience or increased knowledge.
However, most of the students attend to college or university
to earn a degree. The degree will help find a job or open
window of promotion at existing job.
I attend CJR200 class this semester. We have 15 students.
One student said that he attended the class to increased
her knowledge. The rest of the students take the class because
this class is helpful for their career. From that you can
see that my thesis is proved. Most people go for career
preparation.
Many students set up their mind before come to college which
career they will take. Students study on their selected
field of study prepare their career.
Many part-time students attend college and university for
career preparation not for any other reason.For example,
a student go to Medical school to earn a medical degree.
So the student can start a good career.
In conclusion, people go to school and college mainly for
career preparation.
Score of 4:
A typical essay at this level:
addresses the writing topic adequately but
may slight parts of the task
is adequately organized and developed
uses some details to support a thesis or illustrate an idea
demonstrates adequate but possibly inconsistent facility
with syntax and usage
may contain some errors that occasionally obscure meanin
